托福写作常见表达误区与优化指南
北京意学网
时间：10-11
突破写作瓶颈：10大托福表达优化案例
词汇精准化修正
| 问题表达 | 优化方案 |
|---|---|
| The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level | Artists' work upgrades our civilization |
| Their brain is still very young | They are still immature |
句式结构升级
在学术写作中，复合句式的合理运用能显著提升论述的专业性。比较以下两种表达方式：
原句：You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job
优化：You'll discover inherent aptitude for business ventures that could evolve into a fulfilling career
逻辑连接强化
- ▶ 因果表述：
原表达：He will get a higher salary to improve his living level
优化版：Increased remuneration enables substantial enhancement of living standards
学术规范表达
在正式写作中避免口语化表达：
原句：For example, you work in a big factory
优化：Consider an industrial scenario in manufacturing sector