问题类型 | 典型例句 | 优化方案 |
---|---|---|
冗余表达 | When all things are considered... | 直接删除无意义修饰语 |
重复累赘 | said over and over again | 替换为repeatedly |
结构混乱 | There were 25 cows... | 转换主动语态 |
在雅思口语训练中,建议采用三阶段精修法:
原始表达:
"Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents..."
优化建议:
"Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents..."
复杂句式转换:
原句:"The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm."
优化版本:
"My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm."